Comments for How I massacre the English language

Comment on Project – Touhou by Keba

Keba — Fri, 02 Jan 2009 01:57:10 +0000

Actually I was interested in hearing more :3 I’m a new fan of Touhou but haven’t run into any other pages that actually describe the background information about the games.

Comment on Floating Workshop-ness by 121lca

121lca — Tue, 13 May 2008 05:52:00 +0000

I commented on your workshop but I can’t find my comment. Could you please release it? thanks

Comment on My Profile by 121amc

121amc — Tue, 13 May 2008 05:25:50 +0000

wow. I just came here to put the written response I wrote in my profile. I forgot I went back and fixed your grammar. I am a loser.

Comment on Floating Workshop-ness by 121amc

121amc — Mon, 12 May 2008 21:27:54 +0000

I commented on your workshop too. Can you see if you can find it and post it? thanks

Comment on Floating Workshop-ness by Tiffany Cioffi

Tiffany Cioffi — Fri, 09 May 2008 11:15:23 +0000

Phillip, I definitely commented on your floating workshop. Can you check to see if you have approved it, because it’s not here.
Thanks.

Comment on Floating Workshop-ness by 121dtf

121dtf — Fri, 02 May 2008 04:18:42 +0000

hey im pretty sure i posted a comment for your floating workshop, can you check your list of comments to check to see if you have approved mine because i cannot find it in your list of comments here. thanx

Comment on Peer Review Draft by 121amc

121amc — Thu, 01 May 2008 02:17:41 +0000

You didn’t really change anything, so I stand by what I said before. Also, I agree with what Tiffany said above.

Comment on Peer Review Draft by 121tmc

121tmc — Tue, 29 Apr 2008 16:07:30 +0000

You didn’t really change much the second time around so I’m not going to be able to offer that many more helpful suggestions.

You added an introductory sentence, which is worded good and sets the tone for your critical review. However, I still think it would be best to move the “STORY” section to the top, making it your introduction.
As I said before, this would make it cleared and more understandable for readers.

Comment on Floating Workshop-ness by Kanwal Jehan

Kanwal Jehan — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 23:04:01 +0000

Hey Philip, I did comment on your floating workshop. Can you please let me know if you have accepted it because i don’t see it in your comments and if its not there, I don’t credit for it so can you please check it again?

Thank You.

Comment on Discovery Draft by 121amc

121amc — Thu, 24 Apr 2008 14:07:21 +0000

ORAL RESPONSE

WHAT WORKS: Informative. I really like how it is separated into different categories. It really benefits the paper.

WHAT DOESN’T: There isn’t a clear introduction. Also, it may be almost too informative on the technical aspects of the game. It could use more background information.

QUESTIONS: Is there any point to Mobinagi aside from living a fantasy life?